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"Love"
said he,
but his meaning was be,
oh be,
obedient.
pray, prey,
I shall show you The Way,
of He,
said he,
repent, re-pent ...reapent.
said he,
but his meaning was be,
oh be,
obedient.
pray, prey,
I shall show you The Way,
of He,
said he,
repent, re-pent ...reapent.
Haven't written in forever, so I decided to just write what popped into my head. I'm still trying to figure out if I like it or not.
Experimental, and highly subjective, so let me know what you think.
Also, remember to watch out for people who preach to you in capital letters.
Experimental, and highly subjective, so let me know what you think.
Also, remember to watch out for people who preach to you in capital letters.
© 2006 - 2024 Aldalambe
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Interesting use of the english language. I really liked how you contrasted between meanings of similar sounding words, especially in the last stanza.